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Death is your art. You make it with your hands day after day. That final gasp, that look of peace. And part of you is desperate to know: What's it like? Where does it lead you? And now you see, that's the secret. Not the punch you didn't throw or the kicks you didn't land. She really wanted it. Every Slayer has a death wish. Even you.

Spike ,'Conversations with Dead People'

The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.

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Liese S. - Aug 14, 2008 12:59:20 pm PDT #653 of 6739

"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Good. I'm fairly new to betaing, so I'm never sure if I'm giving the right kind of feedback. But I'm really excited about this book.

And I almost bought a bathouse today, and I was thinking of you! Normally, I'd be thinking of Jilli, because it had a supercute bat insignia on it.

Stephanie - Aug 14, 2008 2:26:48 pm PDT #654 of 6739

Trust my rage

I'm ste_noni

Barb - Aug 15, 2008 6:07:20 am PDT #655 of 6739

“Not dead yet!”

Anybody about for a beta? Longish chapter one-- reworked, of my skating romance. Agent Kate wanted more tension and I'm hoping I accomplished it.

SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:09:18 am PDT #656 of 6739

Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

How long are you willing to wait for input, Barb? I'm at work, where I can't really devote my attention to it, but I'd love to take a look at it.

Barb - Aug 15, 2008 6:15:26 am PDT #657 of 6739

“Not dead yet!”

I'm going to be tinkering all weekend, Sail, so no huge hurry, other than the typical author neuroses. *g* You want I should send?

SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:17:28 am PDT #658 of 6739

Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Sure, send it to me at work, I can sneak a peek or two at it throughout the day. (It's very slow here, I have a week to go with nothing to do.)

Ellen dot Morin at GE dot com

Allyson - Aug 15, 2008 8:40:15 am PDT #659 of 6739

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I added you, Stephanie.

Typo Boy - Aug 15, 2008 8:56:45 am PDT #660 of 6739

Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

If you want another Beta, feel free to send along. Profile addy good.

Stephanie - Aug 15, 2008 10:16:43 am PDT #661 of 6739

Trust my rage

Thanks!

SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:19:02 am PDT #662 of 6739

Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Backflung, Barb.

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