Thumbs up from over here.
Also, so very much that.
Ben: I didn't ask for any of this. I just want to be normal. Gronx: I wanted to be an underwear model. We play the hand we're dealt.
'Touched'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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DebetEsse - Feb 18, 2012 12:38:06 pm PST #5105 of 6706
Woe to the fucking wicked.
Beverly - Feb 18, 2012 12:44:36 pm PST #5106 of 6706
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
That's a wonderful piece, and so very true.
Do you want a line reading? I found a few things that bug.
Strix - Feb 18, 2012 12:45:34 pm PST #5107 of 6706
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
Yeah, me too. It's my RD, so please, feel free!
And, thank you for the kind feedback, Debet and Bev.
Liese S. - Feb 18, 2012 12:51:41 pm PST #5108 of 6706
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
Sounds good. I would make sure to check specifically with Shir about the phrasing of her sentence.
Strix - Feb 18, 2012 12:53:20 pm PST #5109 of 6706
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
That's a good idea. Will do.
Zenkitty - Feb 18, 2012 12:57:36 pm PST #5110 of 6706
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.
Lovely, Erin.
Beverly - Feb 18, 2012 1:09:07 pm PST #5111 of 6706
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Back to your owltet addy, Erin. Fingers crossed it raises some awareness, wins you some new clients, *and* possibly earns a little money.
SailAweigh - Feb 18, 2012 1:22:25 pm PST #5112 of 6706
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
That was really awesome. The next time a shrink tries to tell me that I need more meat space friends, I'll hand him a copy of this.
erikaj - Feb 18, 2012 2:24:11 pm PST #5113 of 6706
Always Anti-fascist!
I know that my social workers think I made y'all up.
Burrell - Feb 18, 2012 2:45:22 pm PST #5114 of 6706
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
That's a wonderful piece, and so very true.
What she said, that Bev.