Well, it's just good to know that when the chips are down and things look grim you'll feed off the girl who loves you to save your own ass!

Xander ,'Chosen'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 8:23:24 am PDT #2173 of 6706
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Please pass my thanks on to Emaryn, Gud! I love my young beta readers. Vague comments are very useful. At ten, she might be a little too old for Sam, I think my target is 2nd grade readers (though, honestly, I'm unsure what that really means).

Whoot!


Ginger - Sep 11, 2009 8:32:45 am PDT #2174 of 6706
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I'm reading away, Allyson. Will tonight be too late?


Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 9:14:05 am PDT #2175 of 6706
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Not at all! I'm starved for feedback and will hand it all over to Kate on Sunday after a polish.


Gudanov - Sep 11, 2009 9:42:58 am PDT #2176 of 6706
Coding and Sleeping

I will try to get through more by tomorrow evening. I won't be able to get through it all. I'm a bit over-committed at the moment.


Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 6:18:12 pm PDT #2177 of 6706
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Gud, I just appreciate anything at all, really. Thanks for helping me.


Burrell - Sep 11, 2009 7:29:03 pm PDT #2178 of 6706
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

I have it Allyson but I've been waylaid by illness. I can get to it this weekend. Plus I plan on sharing with the kids.


Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 11:12:13 am PDT #2179 of 6706
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Loving and appreciating the feedback so far!

I'm just so happy with it right now. Even if an editor doesn't buy it, I tried my hand at fiction, and did the best I could. I wrote a second book. Huzzuh.


Ginger - Sep 12, 2009 11:28:38 am PDT #2180 of 6706
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I'm sending my right now.


Scrappy - Sep 12, 2009 12:37:02 pm PDT #2181 of 6706
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

I know I'm late to the party, but I am finally caught up from my trip and I'd love to read it, Allyson. I am home tomorrow and will have time if you care to send it my way.


Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 1:10:19 pm PDT #2182 of 6706
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Scrappy, insent with thanks! Ginger, got it with thanks!