::applauds::
BLOODY GOOD JOB, GUD!
We're not gonna die. We can't die, Bendis. You know why? Because we are so very pretty. We are just too pretty for God to let us die.
Mal ,'Serenity'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Fay - Jul 16, 2009 5:54:12 am PDT #1843 of 6735
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.
-t - Jul 16, 2009 6:06:35 am PDT #1844 of 6735
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
You have! Well done, Gud.
erikaj - Jul 16, 2009 11:30:47 am PDT #1845 of 6735
"Somewhere in this building is our talent." Toby Ziegler, my spirit animal
Yay, you.
Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:36:48 am PDT #1846 of 6735
Coding and Sleeping
In one of the first acts of revision I nixed the name 'Elf' for one of the races. I'm very happy about this since it was more of a placeholder than a description of the race. I've got a name now that has two different meanings in Old High German and Swedish that are both appropriate to the race.
StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 11:44:30 am PDT #1847 of 6735
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark
Gudanov - is it impolite and improper to ask what word you went with? I, amateur philologist and linguist, am forced to ask. :)
Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:49:00 am PDT #1848 of 6735
Coding and Sleeping
StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 12:12:14 pm PDT #1849 of 6735
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark
Oooo! That's NEW to me! Danke - vielen Danke! I'm seriously gleeful (and therefore seriously in need of help)
Gudanov - Jul 18, 2009 5:21:14 pm PDT #1850 of 6735
Coding and Sleeping
Chapter 1 will be a total loss. Pretty much as expected though. Chapter 2 will get axed pretty hard too. All for the best.
Gudanov - Jul 20, 2009 9:04:44 am PDT #1851 of 6735
Coding and Sleeping
I've started revising. I chopped off all the stuff that happened before the action in chapter 1 and I'm rewriting the action sequence itself. Chapter 2 shouldn't be quite as drastic as chapter 1, but it still will get mauled pretty badly. Chapter 3 should stay pretty intact.
Gudanov - Jul 21, 2009 4:44:52 am PDT #1852 of 6735
Coding and Sleeping
I'm getting closer to revised chapter 1. However, partly that is because chapter 1 is shorter and a bit of it is pushed into chapter 2. It seems better to me. My wife says it is way better so far.