Giles, if you would like to get by in American society, then you are going to have to follow our traditions. You're the patriarch. You have to host the festivities, or it's all meaningless.

Buffy ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Laura - Dec 15, 2007 5:01:23 am PST #9590 of 10001
Our wings are not tired.

Hot tea with no carb goodness on the side:

Nice article about Nancy! I love the 5 years, times up element. How often things happen at just the last moment.


Amy - Dec 15, 2007 3:55:42 pm PST #9591 of 10001
Because books.

There's a Laura in the thread! I like that!


DebetEsse - Dec 16, 2007 4:36:30 am PST #9592 of 10001
Woe to the fucking wicked.

Subjunctive Check:

It would be easier to sort the boxes if there was a master list

or

It would be easier to sort the boxes if there were a master list

I cannot get either to sound completely right or wrong, even though I'm leaning toward the first.


Laura - Dec 16, 2007 5:48:38 am PST #9593 of 10001
Our wings are not tired.

I believe was is correct, but were sounds better to my ear. t not helpful


Ginger - Dec 16, 2007 5:51:12 am PST #9594 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

The first is right. A master list is possible; it's neither contrary to fact nor a wish, so it's not subjunctive. If sentences start worrying me like that, I usually consider rewording, e.g., "A master list would make it easier to sort the boxes."


DebetEsse - Dec 16, 2007 2:07:55 pm PST #9595 of 10001
Woe to the fucking wicked.

Thanks, guys.


Strix - Dec 16, 2007 6:40:09 pm PST #9596 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

I shall rise
I shall rise
Clean the night from my eyes
Scatter nightmares to the skies


I shall rise
I shall rise
Firm resolution to be wise
No more faltering into lies


I shall
rise

I shall
rise

Reject that which
Nullifies

I shall. . .
I shall. . .

Rise.

Seek that which purifies

(o silence amplifies my guise)

I shall rise I shall rise!
Break
these ties

I will. . .

I. . .

Will. . .

will dies


Liese S. - Dec 16, 2007 6:41:15 pm PST #9597 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Wow.


Strix - Dec 16, 2007 6:45:30 pm PST #9598 of 10001
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

thanks. Any tips, crits, etc. I wrote it last night, so it's rough


Laura - Dec 16, 2007 6:46:18 pm PST #9599 of 10001
Our wings are not tired.

Oh, did I choose a good time to subscribe.

Very nice, Erin. Wow.